Chapter 1: The Biohazard Protocol: An Overview

In the realm of writing, certain words and phrases can become tiresome due to overuse, especially in AI-generated content. I decided to delve into the frequent clichés found in "The Biohazard Protocol," authored by Billy Coull.

Coull, known for his infamous "Willy's Chocolate Experience" event in Glasgow, charged attendees a hefty forty pounds but failed to deliver a worthwhile experience, leading to chaos and upset among parents and children alike. His literary endeavors seem to be no different, as he has produced several novels, primarily relying on ChatGPT for their creation. I recently listened to a reading of one of his works by Nick Carlson Press on YouTube, which vividly illustrated the madness that could stem from such writing.

This particular book is one of only two available for purchase online, and Nick, being an author himself, bought a copy out of sheer curiosity. His compelling commentary at the end of his first video on this topic deserves attention, so I will link it below.

For this article, I want to highlight the most frequently repeated words and phrases throughout the book. Their overuse became a source of amusement, with Nick's audience playfully suggesting he was spiraling into a "Joker arc" due to his laughter.

1. Responsibility

The term "responsibility" is prevalent, particularly in the latter sections of the book, where it pertains to the main character's professional life. Variations like "responsible" and "responsible science" are also common. The narrative suggests that Emily, the protagonist, learns to temper her ambition and imparts these lessons to future generations.

2. Consequences

The phrase "the consequences of her actions" is mainly associated with Emily. Whether she's facing repercussions or compensating for them, the repetition is glaring.

3. Rested on their shoulders

This AI seems fond of the phrase "rested on their shoulders," showcasing its penchant for flowery language that becomes tiresome with repetition.

4. Delve

Although this word didn’t appear as frequently as others, its inclusion is enough to evoke frustration, especially given ChatGPT's tendency to overuse certain terms.

5. As the sun sets on the horizon

A common refrain in the book is the imagery of sunsets. One reviewer noted his exhaustion with this motif, especially since Emily ages and ultimately dies, yet continues to teach future generations as a projection. The narrative meanders through years, centuries, and even millennia, making the book feel like an eternity despite its brevity.

6. Knowledge

Readers may develop an aversion to the word "knowledge," which is ironically central to a book that exemplifies what not to do with AI writing. The constant emphasis on knowledge’s duality—its potential for both enlightenment and destruction—leaves a lasting impression, perhaps leading to a desire to disengage entirely.

This exploration only scratches the surface of the issues within this book. I hope to analyze more of its shortcomings in future discussions, but for now, examining these repetitive phrases illustrates the writing's lack of originality. Nick's videos further emphasize that Coull likely did not engage with his own work, as it's hard to imagine anyone maintaining their sanity after reading such a convoluted narrative.

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